Turntable Jack

No, it is a first person poem from the character of adolf hitler. His brother, edmund died, and his father beat him as their farm failed. Just showing that any ...

I wrote this earlier in a few minutes for some fun. Not the best poem in the world and not the best flow, but I like the meaning of it ...

I don't think I could pick an album. The whole sub-genre of indie rap has really had a monumental influence on my style and train for thought. If I had ...

I'm back. I only knew a few people who were here, so no one missed me or noticed I was gone. But that is cool and dandy. I have been ...

That is really great. Getting as much knowledge as possible is always a good thing. Keep that up throughout your school "career." Cheers!

Thanks, I understand what you are saying, and that does help. In my original version, i started the book out in a situation where the main character awakes from a ...

Thanks, I am taking all criticism. I am going to re-write most of the book and this does help. What PoV do you suggest I switch too? Or do you ...

Punctuation and Poetry Throughout my time reading poetry from young writers, I realized something rather shocking. Punctuation is often ignored. Not incorrectly used most of the time, but simply ignor

I enjoyed it :P I am a bit tired so I may not give the best advice and will look over this in the morning for a second read. I ...

what do you need to know about it. You can do some quick searches about it to get some basic information regarding the subject. But try to be a little ...

Yea, once I get some more points that will be no problem. Also, if you have anything you want me to critique at all, post a link. Thank you.

Well first let me tell you about what I am uploading. I am uploading the fist 4 chapters of my book which is going to be around 20-25 chapters long. ...

Haha, i thought it was a really short poem I was about to review. I came up with the suggestion to remove " and so unnecessary" to make cruel and ...

It is much better than you think. For some reason or another it flows pretty well and is a bit catchy. Who am I? This is the question I am ...

The Office (American Version) is up there with Scrubs as my favorite shwos currently running. I love them both :D